This is a group for people interested in getting their work critiqued, seems like a good idea.


Tommy 1337Dahl, your death was a tragedy, But I'm almost glad you didn't see The rising of the new way to Make your kids' minds melt into goo. I talk, of course, lest we forget Of the abhorrent INTERNET.Tommy 1337
None of us could contain our joy When this delightful little toy Made little Tommy shut his trap (Much quicker than a lunchtime nap) And seemed, at first, to educate Rather than brain-assimilate. But years rolled on and our new friend Became the source of ghastly trends And Tommy, now at age thirteen, Became rather absurdly keen On women half cat, wi
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TheGreatDamuramu said I needed a signature, if I had something interesting to say you might be interested. Well whatever, stop staring at me *gets nervous* CIRCLE OF TERROR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
*Runs off and whimpers uncontrollably*
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TheGreatDamuramu said I needed a signature, if I had something interesting to say you might be interested. Well whatever, stop staring at me *gets nervous* CIRCLE OF TERROR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
*Runs off and whimpers uncontrollably*
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Raz: So this is it...the mental world.
Kid: It looks like a dentist's office.
Raz: A mental dentist's office...
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